Draft No. 4
Why I recommend it
McPhee shows how nonfiction takes shape through reporting, structure, and revision. It’s a patient look at the work behind clear writing.
What it changed in my thinking
A first draft gives us something to work with. Moving things around and cutting often helps us discover what we’re trying to say.
Who it’s useful for
Writers, editors, and curious readers of nonfiction.
A tension or limitation
You don’t need to copy McPhee’s process. Pay attention to the care he brings to it.